iNiNEPT's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[PALMTREEBEAT]

A few pointers:
1. Synthesizer choice: Generally free VST pianos sound awful unless you know how to mask it. For example, this piano melody will sound better on high octaves. And if you were doing harmonies with the piano, they would sound better stretched out across the low end. Your melody is in that awkward middle area. You can either find a different synth or push it up an octave or two.
2. Tip on writing melodies for hiphop: You need to be able to bob your head too it. So when writing melodies, maybe hum or whistle something random that makes you feel the way you want the song to feel and make sure it's got a good flow (rhythm).
3. Personal preference: That second synth that's accomodating the melody, it seems a little out of place. Maybe again, change the synth, or EQ out the highs so it sounds smoother.

[Celestine]

4 and not 5 only because you should be getting some vocalist on this.

[Ether]

oooooooooh that's smooth!

[STAND IN LINE! [prod. hushinsilence]]

A fellow melodic rapper. Nice! The vocal mixing is a little muddy, but otherwise I do like the flow.

[bumbastic (old demo)]

Reminds me of Yung Gravy

heyopc responds:

unfortunately i look like him too

[Latter End]

I think the frequencies from the piano+reverb are meshing with the 808. This is an unfortunate problem with piano VST plugins, is their frequences are so muddy. Just a thought: maybe put the piano an octave higher? That often resolves the issue for me.

[Xsquared]

I really like it, but for someone to use vocals on, probably need a bridge and another chorus at least.

shlowmo responds:

Thank you! I can but I didn't feel it necessary because it's no apart of my new project.

[AIM - Mister Moss Man]

Agree with X0, shit is clean, but I like the plant though. It works imo. You should put this on youtube so I can add it to my playlist.